Last saturday Chile national team broke history again, was our first win in official games played in Colombia again this national team. With this victory Chile classified to the World Cup, the most important sport competition in hole world, the eyes of everyone on this planet will be on Sudafrica.
This is relevant because our country feels soccer, everywhere people talk about it, is the topic for mondays morning and the national team unites what local teams disjointed. Also this team generates happyness and pride, because this players are people like us, how Bielsa says : "players are an extraction of the Chilean people". But, this "world cup effect" has negative things two, since here untill the end of world cup the problems our country are left in the background.
I like the deffensive players, they need to be focus and play well all the match, one mistake and the work of all team can collapse, while the offensive players can appear ten minutes, make a gol and be heroes. So I like Carlos Carmona, Waldo Ponce, Gary Medel and Claudio Bravo, they protect the team of conceding goals.
In this process is very importante the manager, Marcelo Bielsa, "the crazy", he made a revolution in our soccer, he always try to attack, to passing above rivals, to made many goals, without speculate. Also he introduce discipline in a team which was characterized by acts of indiscipline and he teach the value of hard work. Everyone back to believe in the national team.
Now, we just have to wait, the draw for the world cup is in December, while we will raise money, make the luggages and prepare us to see Chile again in a World Cup
Sudafrica, Here we go!!!
Lions, take care, he will make barbecue with you.
Hi Fabian. Good. Some comments:
ResponderEliminarThe expression is "MAKE HISTORY"
Can you re-write these two lines, pls?
" Last saturday Chile national team broke history again, was our first win in official games played in Colombia again this national team. "
You say, Chile QUALIFIED for the World Cup"
And you spell "whole" with a "W" when you refer to "Complete, entire"
Say, "IT is Monday morning´s topic"
What do you mean by the word "disjointed"?
The word is "THESE" PLAYERS and "AS Bielsa says"
I don´t understand these sentences: "But, this "world cup effect" has negative things two, since here untill the end of world cup the problems our country are left in the background."
Say, "IN THIS PROCESS, THE COACH IS VERY IMPORTANT"
What do you understand by "concede a goal?"
And work on some parallel structure, e.g. "HE TRIES TO ATTACK, TO PASS, TO MAKE"
Don´t forget 3rd person singular, "HE IntroduceS".
This is the marking criteria for this task:
1. Task cpmpletion, 3 points
2. Lexis and cohesion 1.5 points
3. Grammar, 2 points
6 points. You get a 5.0
Paula